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It’s Inside that Counts (NEW!) A ragged visitor comes upon a group of nuclear holocaust survivors with a suspicious remedy.
A Parable Of Worth An ancient voice of wisdom teaches spiritual principles which are meaningful for life in the 21st century.
Making Big Decisions Chris Bee chronicles his diligent search to discover God’s will in the big decisions he’s called to make in his life. A guide for those seeking the peace of God when adding life to their days.
Small Favors Anna discovers her husband, Brennan, has been having an affair. It was only recently that the couple had renewed their marriage vows. How could this happen? How could he do such a thing to her and their children? The family struggles for answers and for a day when they can be thankful for small favors again.
A Surprise Visit Rick and Wendi are having communication problems. A series of misinterpretations, misunderstandings, and unintended events and circumstances exasperate the couple’s frustrating situation – until an unexpected visitor arrives.
Why Am I Going? Chris Bee’s true narrative of his unsuspecting role in the sign and wonder answer to an eGroup prayer request is entertaining and a reminder of how delightfully mysterious are the ways our Father God works.
School Daze Simon is getting no rest being placed in and out of a variety of schools by his church hopping mother. His experiences offer an interesting insight for the discerning in this clever story from M. Krasnoff.
Choices It’s the final college semester for three young women getting ready to make their way into the world. Before they graduate, choices will and have been made that will change the course of each one’s life. A surprise pregnancy announcement leads to a painful secret revealed that will ultimately transform the life tracks of all three.
Mother’s Day Came On Thanksgiving A woman’s family comes together in the last days of her life and discovers intimate details of each other in this poignant story of life and love.
A Day’s End In this short story a conscientious and overworked husband has his world turned upside down in a series of unexpected twists and turns that change the course of his life.
Swimming The patient administration of mother love imparts a potentially fresh perspective for those who consider themselves children of God.
Ron’s Story An honest account of the beautiful and ugly experiences of a man’s life and how he relates them to his faith in God.